Age/Gender: 23, Male
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Exp. Points: 550 / 710
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Voting Pow.: 4.98 votes
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Flash Reviews: 12
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12 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
was okay, needs more length and a plot, and maybe some original elements you draw yourself, using sprites all the time can get repetitive.
whats that music ? best part of the flash.
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It seems like a cool game but, whats the goal in the game? when you fall off the side you just fall forever and the baddies seem quite hard to kill. With a little more work I think It could be really good.
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I voted high based on your animation skill alone, the speach recording was terrible about 90% of the time I could't tell what your characters were saying.
Invest in a better microphone, with the audio it would provide and the flash skills you already evidently have the results would be awesome.
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Funny but its not flash. no sound, no plot .
youtube it, but I don't think it will survive here. cute dog though.
Author's Response:
It will survive.. as it just did. :)
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I think you've done well at bringing nny to flash animation, the only weak part of the flash is the loading screen, just spend a little more time developing it as some people on slower machines will have to look at it for a while, a pool of blood which progressively gets bigger perhaps?
Other than the loading screen The film was very impressive, I look forward to your next project.
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I've seen a movie similair to this called animation vs animator or something, which means the majority of your audience will have too and will compare the quality of that animation with yours, which may not favour your entry.
To improve I'd say try and take the idea beyond what the other flash has, give the characters more props to work with and try to build the personality of the character more (which should be easier when you give them more props to play with.)
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Your style is good, the feel of the movie is nice and chosen song is fitting to the animation. Technically has a few probllems like you need to put some stop music action script at the end so that when it loops, the music dosn't overlay its self.
Overall this submission is very impressive and I look forward to your next one subbmitted.
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"Good but music synchronisation problems."
Fantstic style and artwork, reminds me of firth but not soo much that your style isn't original.
small problem with sound synchronisation, first scene after preloader where we are allowed play control, visuals couldn't keep up with audio.
actual animation played perfectly. very well done, could do with a bit more length.
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What was that song at the main screen? its dam catchy.
Author's Response:
That's That Shit by Snoop Dogg.
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I think the action script has messed up i cant get passed the loading screen, nothings happening. I dont want to blam it, I havent seen the animation, but if it does get blammed dont be disapointed just send it again with the modifications to the action script.
Author's Response:
you can still see the animation by right clicking and pressing play, will fix the preloader soon
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